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Comment on Review: Dead Man’s Bones by josh

josh — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 20:01:35 +0000

Thank you for that correction. I noticed the disparity between the lead vocals of that song and most of the others and assumed it was Zach Shields (or at least someone who was not Ryan Gosling) singing, but with the way that I wrote the review, I made it sound like Ryan Gosling sang that song, too. I wasn’t sure if it was him or not, so thank you for the information. I corrected my review.

Comment on Review: Dead Man’s Bones by Alexandra Shields

Alexandra Shields — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 03:32:36 +0000

Zach Shields sings “Pa Pa Power”.

Comment on my favorite things lately by Chris

Chris — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 21:30:42 +0000

neutral milk hotel! yeah!

Comment on X-Files: Best Standalone Episodes by shotgun

shotgun — Thu, 16 Jul 2009 03:17:09 +0000

X-Files_-_2×14 – Die Hand Der Verletz is a great one… a demon visits and escapes… what i am most disappointed is the fact that there is no sequel for this! i would expect scully and mulder to have a mini-sub-plot against him where it sometimes shows up in new forms.

also you dont mention he obvious – any ‘to be continued’ episode…

Comment on lift your skinny fists like antennas to heaven by flash-player

flash-player — Tue, 07 Jul 2009 17:12:40 +0000

Great post!

Comment on Test Query Letter by josh

josh — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:33:10 +0000

Hey, thanks for the comments. I agree the plot synopsis basically gobbles up the whole query. I had it shorter before by taking out details but it seemed to lack a “bite” then, if you know what I mean. I think today I’ll try another rendition of it using your structure – hook in paragraph one, brief synopsis in para two, and then a closing. Sounds like that might make it tighter. Thanks again for the insight.

Comment on Test Query Letter by Gordon

Gordon — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 04:15:22 +0000

Hey there, thanks for sharing this. Honestly, I think you’ve spent way too much space on the plot synopsis. Use the first paragraph to hook them briefly (either with a high concept, or X meets Y comparison), and introduce the length/genre stats as you did in the final paragraph. Second paragraph = synopsis. Third paragraph is about you, your credits, your familiarity with the recipient, and how your book might fit into the market or their stable. Good luck!

Comment on X-Files: Best Standalone Episodes by Creatrix

Creatrix — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 00:30:01 +0000

No Darkness Falls??! Really?

Comment on Just look at all the passion on that wall… by Just look at all the passion on that wall… ·

Just look at all the passion on that wall… · — Wed, 06 Aug 2008 16:18:44 +0000

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Comment on Beginnings by othelleks

othelleks — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 11:49:41 +0000

It’s amazing